求翻譯!林俊傑-one shot

劉星雨

	最近聽了御我大推薦的歌，林俊傑的one shot 很喜歡他這首歌，但是網路上中文翻譯只有部份而已... 我想要全部的中文翻譯~拜託了! 這裡是英文歌詞~還有我不要google翻譯的，因為很怪... 感謝~ Just one shot Is all you got to make or break into your fame Just one shot They will lift you up and take you down the same Only got one shot Will you give it all you've got Let it take you to the top Or will you bleed it out in vain? Only got one shot Tell your heart to never stop Lock your eyes only on the spot If there is no pain there will be no gain O Father please, I ask for Your mercy They judge me way before they even know me O Father please, do you hear me screaming These lights won't stop chasing after me I will not fall I will not crawl, I will keep on standing tall 'Til I'm strong enough to break this wall Oh~ I won't drown don't tie me down Won't you just set me free It takes one shot to strip it away from me And O my Lord, I can't believe what I saw You got one shot Just to make or break your fame Just one shot They will lift you up, take you down the same Only got one shot Will you give it all you've got Let it take you to the top Or will you bleed it out in vain? Only got one shot Tell your heart to never stop Lock your eyes only on the spot If there is no pain there will be no gain Our father, who art in heaven Hallowed be thy name In thy name I pray to you, oh forever it remains I know you haven't left me but I'm feeling so alone When the darkness comes I shall never have to wait on my own I feel so lost, my mind is going out of control Vengeance is mine, I will repay, says The Lord I'm persecuted but not forsaken, struck down to the floor But not destroyed cause Its not like this hasn't happened before I see these lights and you've warned me to be on the alert My heart is tired from soaking it up like rain in the dirt

etfkds

	19# sakuracat   我們家信道教,我過世的爺爺還兼差法師,可是我連一本道教經典都沒讀過......   其實我們家是信仰道教這一點還是我剛才問我爸的......我還一直以為我家是信佛教跟道教都信的,因為根據我的歷史課本的說法,拿香拜拜的是道教,合掌拜拜的是佛教,我奶奶、爸、媽都有香就拿香，沒香就用手拜一拜，而且有神就拜，完全不管祂是佛教的還是道教的……大部分台灣人對信仰好像都蠻隨性的說。看到對天主教經典熟悉到不需要去翻就知道它在幹麼的人真是讓我肅然起敬啊!

lunarbay

	19# sakuracat 雖然我的中學也是天主教學校 可是我完全沒有接觸過……（默

sakuracat

	17# lunarbay 其實我沒有跑去翻天主教聖經......... 因爲我從小學開始就在天主教學校念書 所以都很熟悉呢

劉星雨

	喔，大大你們真是太厲害了... 像我的英文就很破只翻得出一點點 禱告文什麼的就更不用說了... 謝謝各位大大如此的用心回答我的問題!

lunarbay

	14# sakuracat 你誇張了吧！ 你還去翻天主教的聖經 因為我找英文的來翻譯 嗯 謝謝提醒 我會去修改的 因為英文的解釋是 Hallowed by thy name Holy is your name 所以跟著翻譯就很多版本了…… 畢竟英文詞彙有很多意思

sakuracat

	Just one shot 只需一槍 Is all you got to make or break into your fame 是你需要做的，否則就會身敗名裂 Just one shot 只需一槍 They will lift you up and take you down the same 他們就或許會把你捧上天，也或許將你拉進無底的地獄 Only got one shot 只有一槍的機會 Will you give it all you've got 你會否給予你的所有 Let it take you to the top 讓這把你帶到人生高峰 Or will you bleed it out in vain? 或是你只是徒勞的流盡鮮血？ Only got one shot 你只有一槍 Tell your heart to never stop 告訴你的心永遠不要停止 Lock your eyes only on the spot 把你的雙眸鎖定在那一點吧 If there is no pain there will be no gain 沒有付出就沒有收獲（Pain原意是痛苦，但是譯作付出會比較通順，而且沒記錯英文有一句諺語也是這樣翻譯的） O Father please, I ask for Your mercy 天父，我祈求你的憐憫 They judge me way before they even know me 他們在真正認識我的內心以前就先判斷我 O Father please, do you hear me screaming 天父，請問你聽見了我的尖叫嗎？ These lights won't stop chasing after me 那些燈光不停的追隨著我 I will not fall I will not crawl, I will keep on standing tall 我不會跌倒也不會在地上爬，我只會繼續站直 'Til I'm strong enough to break this wall 直至我強壯得可以破壞這塊牆 Oh~ I won't drown don't tie me down 我不會溺死，不要綁住我 Won't you just set me free 你不能就放我自由嗎 It takes one shot to strip it away from me 只需要一槍就可以解決我的枷鎖和罪孽 And O my Lord, I can't believe what I saw 我的天父，我不能相信自己看見了甚麼 You got one shot 你只需一槍 Just to make or break your fame 只需一槍或是你會身敗名裂 Just one shot 只需一槍 They will lift you up, take you down the same 他們就或許會把你捧在天，或是把你拉進無底的地獄 Only got one shot 只有一槍 Will you give it all you've got 你會給予你的所有嗎 Let it take you to the top 讓這一槍把你帶到高峰 Or will you bleed it out in vain? 或是你會徒勞的流儘鮮血？ Only got one shot 只有一槍 Tell your heart to never stop 告訴你的心不要停止 Lock your eyes only on the spot 將你的雙眸鎖定在那一點 If there is no pain there will be no gain 沒有痛苦就沒有收獲 Our father, who art in heaven 我們的天父 Hallowed be thy name 愿您的名受顯揚 In thy name I pray to you, oh forever it remains 以您的名義我向您祈求 I know you haven't left me but I'm feeling so alone 我知道您沒有離開我，但是我卻是那麼孤獨 When the darkness comes I shall never have to wait on my own 當黑暗來臨我永不再獨自等待 I feel so lost, my mind is going out of control 當我迷失了，我的意念就像是失控了 Vengeance is mine, I will repay, says The Lord 主說我會回報我的復仇 I'm persecuted but not forsaken, struck down to the floor 我被避害但是沒有被離棄，也沒有跌坐在地上 But not destroyed cause Its not like this hasn't happened before 因以前已經發生過類似的事，這並沒有夷滅我 I see these lights and you've warned me to be on the alert 我看見那些燈光，然後你警告我要當心 My heart is tired from soaking it up like rain in the dirt 我的心已經因在泥濘和雨水中淹泡而疲倦了 其實某些句子我只是意譯 為求通順而已 不過大部分也是字面上翻譯

sakuracat

	4# etfkds 不用謝呢 但是我現在還發現了個小問題 雖然我們在天堂的天父字面上是沒問題 但是完全跟隨天主經的話會比較好： 我們的天父 愿您的名受顯揚

sakuracat

	實在太神了吧大大的翻譯很厲害呢！ 雖然翻譯是對了但是這個小問題可以抓一下（？） 因為如果完全跟隨天主經的話會比較好 Our father, who art in heaven 我們的天父 Hallowed be thy name 愿您的名受顯揚 然後我還記得天主經還有另一個比較接近的現代英語版本： Our father, who are in heaven. holy be your name.

lunarbay

	12# etfkds 我們的英文課節數比你們少欸 你太誇張了啦 因為三種語言的關係 我的馬來文和英文都很差

etfkds

	11# lunarbay 台灣的英語也在正課裡~以高三生來說,一個禮拜7節課(至少我們學校是這樣) 三、種、語、言！？你們真是太強了!光是中、英文我就不行了！