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[原創文] In the Rain--staircase

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發表於 2012-2-27 15:32:21 | 只看該作者 回帖獎勵 |倒序瀏覽 |閱讀模式
這其實是我的功課來着...
但我覺得自己的英文着實很爛所以想各位英文比我好的大大給我看看...
寫出來後我才發現自己的文好像不怎麼合題...
拜託各位幫幫眼了!



In the Rain--staircase

  Weather in Melbourne is really strange. In the Morning, the sun is shine, can be a beautiful day, but in the evening clouds come out and raining cats and dogs. One day after school, I walked in a heavy rain, it was the day I won’t forget.

  That day I was practicing the piano at school, and I left school late. When I finished the practicing and came out… I saw it was raining really really heavily outside. Fortunately I found an umbrella in my school bag. So I went into the rain. But quickly found that, my umbrella was too small. I felt annoying that I had no choice to back on other way. And I kept walking in the big rain.

  I walked to a staircase. I looked up that staircase, I thought I saw many waterfall, and lots of the water going down. I didn’t know how to do, I just stood in the rain and stared at the “ waterfalls”. Finally I decided to overcome that staircase. I started to step on the stairs.

“Splash!!!”

   My first step on the stairs, the water splashed, my legs got wet. And I stopped , not continued another step. Because I needed to think about how to finished the stairs and not got less wet. I thought a while, and started again. I found the less water place and not slowly step on it. I tried few steps, then I knew the solution worked. So I walked carefully. Five minutes after, I finally went to the top of the staircase. At that time I made a decision, I will not walk the staircase in the heavy rain any more.
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發表於 2012-2-27 15:40:47 | 只看該作者
這是功課OAO?
赤醬(?)好厲害耶~
還好吧?沒有很文不對題呀OAO
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發表於 2012-2-27 16:00:26 | 只看該作者
寫的還不錯~
我也只看得懂一大部份
我自己也不喜歡下雨呢(不  不是這個問題
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發表於 2012-2-27 16:05:15 | 只看該作者
果然學英文有效((不你
下雨濕濕的好麻煩阿((不對吧
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發表於 2012-2-27 16:19:30 | 只看該作者
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發表於 2012-2-27 16:27:06 | 只看該作者
落湯雞...好慘QAQQ((不你
恩有效阿...都看得懂...吧
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發表於 2012-2-27 19:20:57 | 只看該作者
哇~
大家的英文都好強說@ @
我到現在連初級的英文單字都不太會用XDD
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