彼墨楔 發表於 2014-11-28 21:34:21

10# 雪陵

Not in the mood to reply in Chinese too, the tone is too different to feel comfortable if I do that, so there.

That, is a horrible translation for sap and fluff, seriously. *dead-pan face*

It's my first slash fic, what do you expect? Really trying to tone down the word count though, and I know you (and me too) are used to long fics that are, frankly, quite epic~ Personally think it's a good first-shot at short fics. I really don't want to write a 4000-plus character one so close to...something important in school. Check the date, was it close to a test or something?

At least its IC, I really dislike OOC ^^

My long and extremely complicated plots never reach their end, and you're one big reason for that XD

I'll try, but really? It's hard to cram impact into that itty-bitty piece, what with the using-extremely-long-sentences-to-describe-things thing I have going on. Still working on it XDD
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